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By Phil Mitchell

GENRE: Romance

Jeff divorces his cheating wife, and finds true love with Sharmini a beautiful Indian girl from his local newspaper shop. Jeff has a record win on the National Lottery, but his honesty is tested by Sharmini's dishonest father who tells him the lottery was fixed. Revenge on his ex-wife is sweet.


A love story about an honest hard working young man who fights his way through an ugly divorce. His luck changes when he finds true love in the arms of Sharmini a beautiful Indian girl who works in a local paper shop.

“Only one day” after his divorce, Jeff wins one hundred and forty five million pounds on a twelve week rollover jackpot on the National Lottery,

Sharmini’s father tests Jeff’s honesty by telling him the lottery was fixed but he mustn’t tell Sharmini.

Not wanting to start his relationship with Sharmini with a lie, Jeff tells her and calls the National Lottery people telling them of the fix. All hell breaks loose. But as it's not true, the problem is resolved.

After a trip with two friends to Disney World Florida, Jeff and Sharmini are engaged.

They have a beach wedding in the Dominican. Then an Indian wedding in England.

Jeff orders a two foot long piece of sweet peppermint rock in the shape of a penis, with Guildford written through it.

This relates back to Jeff’s ex-wife, who two and a half years earlier, when driving away in a friends car stuck her head out of the window and shouted her parting comments back at him. she said she had been with another man in “Guildford and his cock was as hard as a rock.” He sends the rock to his ex-wife.


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Nathaniel Baker

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Nathaniel Baker

LOVE IT!!!!!!

Phil Mitchell

Thanks again Nathaniel for your favourable comments. All I need now is for someone to come along and make movies out of my scripts.

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