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NO HONOR
By William Young

GENRE: Independent
LOGLINE:

An ex-high school football star is sent to prison for the first time and inadvertently introduces his mother to a serial killer.

SYNOPSIS:

Ex-high school football star Bryant tries to help his mother and their falling crops by turning to crime. He ends up being caught for a burglary and is sent to prison after his best friend Tim rats him out. It doesn’t take long for Bryant’s exceptional athletic skills to be recognized and is befriended by Angel, a harden convict who runs the football team for the whites. Angel invites Bryant to be their starting quarterback and Bryant gladly accepts. When Angel meets Bryant mother Sarah in the visiting room, a romance begins. Things seem to be going smoothly until Tim is transferred to the same prison as Bryant. When Bryant refuses to take action against Tim for being a rat, Angel takes the knife from Bryant and fatally stabs Tim to death. Refusing to admit that something evil is lurking behind Angel actions, Bryant keeps this horrendous act a secret. Angel paroles and does a remarkable job on the farm deceiving Sarah and the locals as he brutally rapes and kills young women. Bryant suspicious begins to arise when a detective visit and informs him that Angel is a serial killer and is responsible for the latest murders in his hometown. When the detective comes up dead and Bryant gets transferred to a minimum-security prison and with no word from his mother in months, he must make the daring escape and save his mother and family before it’s too late?

Aschwin Urban

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Aschwin Urban

Hey William!

Sounds like a great story.

In the end of the synopsis you get to the interesting part for a logline.

So I am playing with that for a bit if you don't mind.

Ex-high school football star needs to break out of prison to stop a just released harden ex-convict before killing his family.

Let me know!

Thanks

Aschwin

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