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POWDER
By Alana de Freitas
When a struggling writer falls for the girlfriend of a criminal kingpin and accidentally bungles his huge drug deal, he must try to escape with his life... and win the girl.
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This one is getting there. The second half is too vague. Escape with his life from what? Win the girl how? I think just be specific. If he's trapped in a deal gone wrong or if he's now being chased by the kingpin for messing up are totally different, and we don't know which it is from the log, or if it's another thing.
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I like this. Reminds me of the Kevin Costner film, "Revenge" in a way.
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