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CAUSALITY
By Bob Johnson
A scientist is visited by future versions of himself, desperate to prevent his discovery of time travel.
SYNOPSIS:
You can't change the past. Or can you?
A scientist working on quantum entanglement theory is visited by four future versions of himself. He learns that his discovery will lead to time travel, and its impact on the future won't be good.
Note: This 7-page screenplay would be perfect for a student project. It needs one location, one actor, some makeup, and a little ingenuity. DM me for the script.
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Causality sounds like an interesting Time Travel story, Bob Johnson. Your logline is just the setup. I suggest adding the story goal and the stakes. I also suggest adding an adjective for the protagonist (the main flaw he has to overcome in the script or an adjective that describes his personality). It'll give the reader more insight into his character.
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