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Zac's
an average 16yr old kid, well so he thinks. until he finds out that
he's an alien. Well, his whole family are aliens. But that is the least
of his problems, with evil Lord Zarg hot on his trail and King Vulmar
showing up once too often.
His best friends Dave and Charlie,
get sucked into his drama. The three reluctantly team up with Zac's
Grampa, a portal master; Hagus a tough as nuts, club weilding alien;
Tukar a giant bird, who's the brains of the group; and Condor, their trusty four-armed pilot.
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