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THE LAST IN LINE

THE LAST IN LINE
By Miles Crossman

GENRE: Adventure, Comedy
LOGLINE:

After his daughter mysteriously vanishes, a self conscious antique shop owner and his tenacious employee battle dark forces before they can use the girl to resurrect an ancient demon.  

SYNOPSIS:

After his daughter Becky mysteriously vanishes from her bedroom, Antique shop owner Ray is the prime suspect. With the help of tenacious Parker, Ray investigates clues that lead them to the underground world of the supernatural under the spectre of Detective Johnson. A recurring symbol points them to a gang and the discovery that Becky was haunted by nightmares of a sinister young girl with long white hair.

They track the gang and uncover their secret ritual that sends children through the veil of reality to Otherworld, the alternate plane of decay, in order to bring back the god Moloch. After collecting the keys to the portal, they discover that Detective Johnson is one of Moloch’s acolytes. A mysterious Button Lady appears and gives them the final clue to get to Otherworld and save Becky and tells Ray that he and Becky are the Last in Line of the ancient Carthaginian nobles.

After opening the portal to Otherworld, Parker and Ray race to find Becky. In order to rescue her, Ray must combine the keys with the final clue to create a weapon capable of defeating Moloch’s servants. With Becky saved, they narrowly escape the arrival of Moloch and close the door behind them trapping the forces of evil on the other side.

Nathaniel Baker

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