Jerry Robbins: Screenwriter.

Phoebe Anasco
Phoebs here, Story Strategist.

Hey Stage 32 peeps! Phoebe here.

I just joined recently and wanted to connect with fellow creatives — especially those passionate about animation.

I’m a story strategist and my dream is to be part of a team that helps bring animated films to life — like Finding Nemo, Soul, or maybe something even bett...

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Bob Harper

Hi, I'm in post-production on a short film that will be submitted to festivals, and I'm in early pre-production for an animated feature.

Phoebe Anasco

Hi Cyrus Sales, Id be glad to connect.

Dan McCrory

Did I stick that question in the wrong place? Happens all the time! What is a story strategist?

Aaron Traikovski
Unfinished script

Hi all, I have hit a bit of a wall in my script and just over halfway through, I was wondering if any services on here looked into this sort of aspect of script/screen writing, that is, an unfinished script.

Many thanks.

Lindbergh E Hollingsworth

Usually when a writer gets half way through and hits the invisible wall it's because you didn't plot your story. You didn't create a conflict that could sustain itself through the middle act. Can this...

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Rebecca James

For me plotting is crucial.

Savannah Abrishamchian

Aaron, as a writer who admits that I don't love the outline process and being married to it, I have found my own ways to answer what happens once you are heavily in progress with your script and going...

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Hi Everyone

I've been a stage 32 member for a few years. I started in audio drama, writing 480 scrips for stand-alone, several original series, and multi-hour dramatizations of lit classics. I had the honor of working with Ray Bradbury on his audio drama's DANDELION WINE, THE HALLOWEEN TREE, SOMETHING WICKED TH...

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Maurice Vaughan

Hi, Jerry Robbins. Hope you're enjoying the start of summer! What a resume! Congratulations on all your accomplishments! I've been thinking about turning some of my scripts into audio dramas. I'll pro...

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Jerry Robbins

Thanks, Maurice. It will take some tweaking if you want to turn a screenplay into an audio drama... it's a different ballgame - especially if you have any action sequences. When the time comes - shoul...

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Maurice Vaughan

You're welcome, Jerry Robbins. That'll be great! Thanks. I appreciate it.

Marc Serhan
Copyright mention

Hi,

This may sound weird to some of you, but just to make sure.

Question: Do you have to add the copyright mention on the title page of your screenplay? I mean, if you're posting (making it public), it is assumed that you own the copyright. So what's the 'best practice'?

Marc Serhan

Which raises the question: Is AI friend or foe?

I guess it depends on who wields it and to what end.

Ryan Wilford

Marc Serhan From what I researched when I got my screenplay copyrighted, we don't have to, but lightly adding a watermark could be beneficial. If it's copyrighted it's already protected. I had my trea...

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Jerry Robbins

Title, written by, contact info. That's it.

Vikki Harris
Singing in Animated Movies

I have an idea for an animated movie. I have never written a screenplay in this genre before. My questions is, "Do you consider the singing sequences when writing?" It seems that all animation have singing and music. Second question: Does anyone know where I can obtain a copy of an animated script? I'm going need one as an example.

Jerry Robbins

Hi Vikki, I've written two with a composer who created the songs. You can see them in my loglines - JIMMY AND THE STAR ANGEL and SHOWGHOSTS.

Vikki Harris

Thank you Maurice Vaughan .

Maurice Vaughan

You're welcome, Vikki Harris.

JIMMY AND THE STAR ANGEL
GENRE: Animation
LOGLINE:

Two siblings mourning their father’s death are pulled into their Christmas tree, where they must rekindle their holiday spirit and reach the Star Angel — or remain trapped as ornaments forever.

Caliann Lum

Rated this logline

Marcos Fizzotti

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Yves Banchaux

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Daniel Brocks

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Abdusamad Shafiev

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Sille Larsen
Streaming vs. Theatrical: What Are You Writing For?

Hey writers! ✍️

I’ve been thinking a lot lately about the endgame for our scripts — not just getting them made, but how they’re released.

Here's the question:

Do you write with streaming in mind, or are you aiming for the big screen?

And how does that affect your tone, structure, or format?...

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E Langley

Thank you, girlfriend. Another one of life's mysteries solved. :)

Asif Balouch

My scripts, if produced, are ones that could work on either platform. They have enough spectacle and high-concept premises to pull people into a movie theater to enjoy and I can see them being very st...

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Pat Alexander

Hey Sille Larsen what a brilliant question that gets to the heart of modern screenwriting strategy! The truth is, the lines between streaming and theatrical have blurred significantly, but there are s...

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Maurice Vaughan
Ways to End a Scene

One of the ways I like to end a scene in a script is showing an object, vehicle, or action that’s similar to the first action line in the next scene.

Example: I’ll end a scene with a basketball going into a hoop, then show a balled-up paper going into a trash can in the next scene, like someone is sh...

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Ewan Dunbar

A good saying is to "arrive late and leave early" in a scene. I recently re-watched Get Shorty and found it very strange in several scenes when the conversation has ended, but we're watching the chara...

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Maurice Vaughan

"Arrive late and leave early" is great advice, Ewan Dunbar. I used to arrive early and leave late. Haha I don't write my characters leaving rooms, closing doors, etc. unless it's important to the stor...

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Pamela Jaye Smith

Thanks for the perfect reason to watch Get Shorty again, Ewan. I've always enjoyed that movie.

Novel to screen adaptations

What is everyone's favorite novel to screen adaptations?

I love reading a good book and then being able to watch it on the big screen. I recently read The Handmaid's Tale and have been loving watching it play out in the incredible Hulu series version.

Amy Moffatt

I think it often gets a little overlooked but Bridget Jones Diary is a rare example of an extraordinarily well done book to film adaptation.

Jerry Robbins

I'll go back 90 years and say CAPTAIN BLOOD for starters. For the period in which it was made (when Hollywood would adapt a book by keeping the title and changing everything between the covers), it wa...

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Ewan Dunbar

Its interesting when the adaptation is actually better than the book. The way Layer Cake was adapted made it really engaging and there are moments in the movie Hunt for Red October that build suspense far better than the book.

Sandra Isabel Correia
How Much Does a Script Change After Shooting?

Hi screenwriters :))

I post this at the Writers’ Room, but I would love also to know from you.

Until now, I’ve written scripts to be produced and directed by other professionals. But stepping into the production and directing side, I’ve realized something fascinating: the final draft of my script was...

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Pat Savage

Hello dear!es This is normal.and there are three versions of a script. The original you wrote, the script you film with changes on the fly between the script consultant and the director. Then is the final one you edit.

Sandra Isabel Correia

You are right Jerry Robbins and I hope one day you can produce. Will help you a lot in your filmmaking journey:))

Sandra Isabel Correia

Hi my beautiful friend Pat Savage. Thanks for reaching out. Yes, now I know and for me I am editing the final one after shooting :)) Now I understand the process:)) Big hug for youuuu

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