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DADDY
By Marty Chartrand
An assassin’s last act is to prove to his daughter and his wife that he is not a bad man.
SYNOPSIS:
Tyler weaves his way through goon after goon in order to reach his
ultimate target of Ivan. All the while hoping this act of valor redeems
himself to his daughter and his wife.
DADDY
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I liked the logline, on its own. The synopsis needs a little more clarity in my OP.. "Does killing Ivan redeem him to wife and daughter and is considered an act of valor? in their eyes?
i like the plot idea...family emotions work well, off course if we crack the screenplay perfectly.
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I like it. The idea of little girl voice, over a criminal action is really good. Where can I read the whole script?
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