How's it going, Raymond Zachariasse? I like the concept. I think the logline needs some work though. Something like: "After discovering he forgot his wedding day, a ______ (adjective) tries to mend the mistake he made years ago so _________ (stakes)."

Is the mistake "discovering he forgot his wedding day" or something else?

Also, the logline sounds like a Romance script, but you have the script listed as a Comedy. I would work on the logline to make it sound like a Comedy.

Maurice, it's a dark comedy and when you read the screenplay you know that his mistake is not directly a reference to a happy marriage :)