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ELUSIVE DREAMING
By Jamie Sadler
Two friends, with nothing better to do during a power cut, take a nap. They unexpectedly meet up in a lucid dream, but can the "masterpiece" they write together make it back into the waking world before the "they" realise what they're upto?
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That's basically it, but it's got some noir in it, and CHEESE CANDLES!
ELUSIVE DREAMING
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Sounds interesting .
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The story setting is certainly intriguing, but I'm confused by the "masterpiece" and why what they are creating has to be moved to reality. I'd like to see more clarity when it comes to conflict. Who are the two friends directly opposed by? What are the stakes? (I do have a logline help-sheet I can send if that's of any help to you.)
Thanks for looking, it's 11 pages of surreal silliness. I'd love to take a look at the help sheet, please. I'll fatten out the synopsis to actually say something useful, I didn't think anyone would look at it, to be honest. It was mostly there for filler but I do like it...