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When the war between two alien empires puts Earth in their crosshairs, Frank Ponder and the Doomsday Clockwatchers must learn the secret of life to save the world. Frank must grow from a nerd to the man who can save the Earth or will die trying.
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PONDER
verb (used without object)
1. to consider something deeply and thoroughly; meditate (often followed by over or upon).
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