THE STAGE 32 LOGLINES
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VIOLET
By Sarah Deakins
Two attendants working in an underground public bathroom in the seediest part of town form a friendship with a prostitute who forces them all to face their secrets, as they form the world's most unexpected book club.
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Thanks Brad. I am forever working on that logline, ha! That is actually one that a logline "expert" came up with. It's such a specific art, isn't it?
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Intriguing set-up.
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In the seediest part of town, a prostitute lets two public bathroom attendants pledge to face their deepest secrets, forming the world's most unexpected book club.
The problem here is that it feels like the movie would only be about setting up (knowing? that they're just the first three member) while I could imagine that it's about the set up AND the writing in the established club.
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