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ZERO POINT ZERO

ZERO POINT ZERO
By Joydeep Roy Choudhary

GENRE: Fantasy, Drama, Adventure
LOGLINE:

While attempting to produce a documentary with a close friend, a college girl meets an impoverished small child, a wiz kid . A scientist who had solved the mystery of time changed the boy into a genius overnight, and as they came closer to their key element, their future became their new past.

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Donnalyn Vojta

Hey, Joydeep! I'm intrigued, but your logline needs some work. You don't want to lose out on a producer choosing to read your script because the logline has some technical problems. Am I right?! :-) First, remove the proper names. Second, condense it to one sentence. Third, don't use verbs like "learn." Use action verbs because this movies are a visual medium. Best of luck to you!

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