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A disgraced cop finds his daughter strapped to a bomb in the back of his squad car and must find the trigger before it detonates.
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I wrote this short yesterday - New Year's Day. It's a super-rough first draft.
Looking for constructive criticism.
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WOW!!!
It's gritty, dramatic and has the potential of being something Denzel would star in. It's Terrific.
I'd love to read the screenplay!