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A law student on the run escapes into a subway station only to find himself stuck in a time-loop with five mysterious passengers.
SYNOPSIS:
MICHAEL is chased down a small abandoned street and ducks into a subway station to escape. Downstairs on the platform he joins five other passengers also waiting for the train: a melancholy teen, an agitated waitress, an angry old businessman, a little girl named SOPHIE, and her absent-minded mother. The train arrives and they all get on board.
Michael watches as they each get off at their respective stops until he’s the only one left. When he arrives at his stop, he steps off the train and is horrified to find himself back at the station he started. The the same five passengers are waiting for the train, as if they never got on.
Michael makes frantic attempts to escape the station. He refuses to acknowledge the situation until he learns that he’s not alone. The little girl is also aware.
Together, Michael and Sophie must figure out what they have in common and what secret they hold with the other passengers, or remain stuck in the subway forever.
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