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During a sleepover on her birthday , a teen girl and her three friends skip the rule of not going out after the midnight hour while being stalked by a psychopath. Will she see another year or will she become another victim.
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Midnight sounds interesting, @Nicholas. Your logline is just the setup. I suggest adding the girls' goal and the stakes.
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I could try that Maurice Vaughan
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