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BREATHLESS
By Flávia Ruiz Perez
When a well-known, powerful media executive, with a mysterious sleeping disorder reaches the top of her career, the tragic death of her mentor brings up issues about her role in the past, untimely death of her own brother, and now she must fight for life while her own sanity and sense of reality are in question.
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Ok, so by now you've noticed I've been rating most of your loglines. You've gotta shorten them. Try saying as much as you can in the fewest words possible. And also, only include info that's relevant to the plot. Side characters can come later. Just a few tips I've been learning. Figured it could help. Good luck!
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