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COLD SUN
By Lee Durant

GENRE: Science Fiction
LOGLINE:

When the earth starts breaking down after the sun goes cold, a team of brave humans must undertake a mission to bring it back to life, with time against them, they must pull together if they have any chance of success

Gen Vardo

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Gen Vardo

You have a cool premise. I want to know what the cost is. I can't help thinking of a new logline for it:

The sun died out years ago leaving people adapting to the cold. Now the cold is coming to an end, and freezing is about to begin, a costly solution is chosen.

Nate Rymer

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Lee Durant

thanks for the rating and the comment, the logline you wrote is making me rethink it. ill be honest i've not really thought my logline through its just a type of cold opening that I wrote first , the cost I guess is the end of all life.

Tasha Lewis 2

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