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ALL THIS TIME
By Aimee McGuire

GENRE: Thriller, Drama
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When the local government starts a program for homeowners to house incarcerated citizens, a struggling single mom forms an unexpected relationship with her inmate tenant, one that takes a complex turn after she learns their pasts are connected.

J.B. Storey

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James Welday

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James Welday

Hi Aimee, may I suggest this: "When the local government starts a program for homeowners to house incarcerated citizens, a struggling single mom forms an unexpected relationship with her inmate tenant, one that takes a complex turn after she learns their pasts are connected."

If it doesn't sound right, feel free to discard it. haha

Nathaniel Baker

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Aimee McGuire

I like that James Welday . The word struggling already suggests she needs to make ends meet, so it is a bit redundant. Thanks for the suggestion!

James Welday

You're welcome, happy to help!

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