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THE CLOSING
By Ronika Merl
Burdened with debt, David goes on a journey to a mysterious island to discover his dead father's secret family, only to find much more darkness lurking beneath the surface.
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Hi, Ronika. I think the logline needs a little work. Just a little bit. :)
"Burdened with debt, a ________ (adjective) _______ (role/title) journeys to a mysterious island to discover his dead father's secret family, only to find much more darkness lurking beneath the surface."
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