THE STAGE 32 LOGLINES
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UNTITLED
By Michael Donovan
When a beloved actor's mistress threatens to go public, he hires a deranged fan to kill her. He then realizes he's made a mistake and must race to stop him before it's too late.
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This is not a bad start! I think there is a more elegant way to combine the two sentences into one while keeping the core idea intact.
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