O.K. Kiaya , By attacked I gather you mean raped. This works better if the coach is a guy. Or maybee she pulls away from her own father or brother or boyfriend. Basketball is hard to shoot. Make it a chess team or spelling contest group. Thats just budget talking sorry, and here I bet you love basketball. Having lots of grils scorring hoops doesnt impact the story but showing their game going in the tank oooo and chess pieces moving by themselves and becoming large and a girl wandering a black white checkered tiled floor. mayhbee. I (in real life) got off a bus right after a woman and started walking home she kept crossing the road in front of me so it ended up looking like I was following her, after a block and a half she took off running. , I was really surprised by this and I have never talked to another guy who had this happen but my eyes started burning like I wanted to cry and I was astonished. I reckon she did the right thing but it still hurt my feelings. Feel free to stick that in as dialog anywhere you can use it. oooooo yeah when she tells her dad/brother /boyfriend thats what he says so she says: swell. I got raped and its all about how your feelings got hurt once! gah. my feeling didtn get hurt (__fill in the blank_________) I got raped. Did you ever read Dean Koontz's : INTENSITY?