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COLLATERAL DAMAGE
By Katie Mobley

GENRE: Thriller / Suspense, Mystery, Drama, Crime
LOGLINE:


After a series of mysterious disappearances threatens to tear apart a super-powered community, an anxious solider comes up with an elaborate lie to save her skin and joins forces with a burnt out ex-supervillain to solve the mystery.

SYNOPSIS:

Five years of bad decisions have ruined Rachel Goodman's community, her relationship with her father and her friends. Feeling isolated and abandoned, she makes a plan to make it all right. When a reckless decision to rob Marcus's mansion comes to fruition, she finds out he's been murdered, and everyone is going to think she did it. Just when she thinks things can't get worse, she collides with a soldier that has powers even greater than her.

When this electric, anxious soldier, Kaitlin Adler, reveals that she shouldn't be here, Rachel takes advantage of the situation and convinces her that she is of help, playing the good guy. Wanting to really ransom the soldier and burn the evidence, she steals a laptop containing the last of Marcus's research against their enemy...

...While his ten year old daughter stands in the doorway.

Today got worse.

Maurice Vaughan

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Maurice Vaughan

The concept sounds very interesting, Katie Mobley. It sounds like a fun series. The synopsis and the logline don't match though. I would rework them so they match. Also, it should be "soldier" in the logline.

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