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HARD RESET
By Zoltan Tillman
A tech inventor navigates an important period of his marriage and life as he searches for a new job, before suffering a car crash that leaves him in a dire state... just as he's needed to help deal with a supernatural threat.
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Hey, Zoltan Tillman. The concept sounds unique, but I think the logline needs some work.
For a logline, you want something like: "After ______ (something happens/the inciting incident), a _______ (the protagonist with an adjective) tries to _______ (goal of story) so ________ (stakes)."
Loglines are one or two sentences. You can add the antagonist in the logline. The inciting incident can also be at the end of the logline.
Example #1:
"After a group of dog criminals arrives in a small town, an impulsive dog sheriff defends a dog treat factory so they won't steal food that's meant for hungry dog families."
Example #2:
"A dysfunctional couple works together to survive against bears after they crash on an abandoned road miles from help."
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