THE STAGE 32 LOGLINES
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ONE MORE TRY
By Hugh Potter
Jennifer just wanted to have a beer and watch the super bowl with her friends. Then he came into the bar and made a play for her younger sister. She lashed out at him not knowing he was a serial killer.
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I see some expressionnism here and there. It reminds me of the old German movies they produced after WWII.
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You might have a strong story here, but I’m not quite clear on the serial killer’s intentions — it feels like an important piece of the puzzle is missing.