Hey, @Payne. WINDOWS sounds interesting, but I think your logline needs more info. Right now, it's just the setup. I suggest adding the story goal and stakes.

Hey again, @Payne. I read your script. I wasn't expecting that! Creepy script. There's not a lot in the script to make a logline with, but I think you could make your logline more interesting.

Something like: An ordinary teenager gets a stern warning while playing a "normal" dating simulation game on his computer.

Or this: An ordinary teenager gets a stern warning from someone outside while playing a "normal" dating simulation game on his computer.