Hello everyone,
I'm Trung, a 14-year-old aspiring screenwriter from Vietnam.
This is the introduction to my second film idea. I'd love to hear any thoughts, feedback, or suggestions from you all!
Introduction:
After failing his college entrance exam and fearing to disappoint his parents, Minh runs away from home. But during a drunken reunion with old friends, he wakes up to find himself in Cambodia. Across the border, they force him to make scam calls to people in his own country, forcing him to meet a quota of 20 victims per month. If he fails, he will be brutally beaten and mentally tortured. When he reaches his limit, Minh has only one choice: risk his life to escape that hell and flee to Vietnam - his homeland.
Thanks so much for reading!
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Hi, Thanh Trung Nguyen. Your logline is too long. It's 94 words and five sentences. Five sentences is a short synopsis. Loglines are one or two sentences. A one-sentence logline sounds better, and it takes less time for a producer, director, etc. to read it. Try to keep your logline to 35 words or less.
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