Anything Goes : Just passing on stage32 to... by Ugo Cavallo

I like your artwork, Ugo Cavallo. Here's part of a scene in a Horror Action feature script I'm rewriting:

INT. VPSN STORE - DAY

Military surplus store turned into a sleek vampire-proofing store. State-of-the-art merchandise. VPSN logos everywhere. An armed security guard stands at the front door.

Customers shop in a panic. Most of the shelves and racks are empty. Employees rush to restock.

Brian drops garlic handgun ammo in his cart. Gun on waist.

A commercial plays on TV. A lively ACTOR (20) smiles, wearing a hi-tech weapon on his back (two large, folded wings). A gun is attached to the inside of each wing.

Brian's eyebrows raise as he watches the commercial.

ACTOR

Don't be dinner this year. Order the Bat Wings, the ultimate weapon for slaying vampires! Only one hundred thousand dollars.

The actor taps a button on his wrist tablet, and BEEP! The wings activate and spread. He fires wooden stakes from the guns at a vampire dummy, slaying it.

The actor smiles big at the screen. Brian's eyes open a little wider, impressed.

Actor strolls to a display stand that's holding a state-of-the-art case. Bat wings are engraved on the case.

ACTOR

Buy now! Only available through Vampire-proof Shopping Network. Same day delivery or pick up one at your local VPSN store!

The VPSN logo flashes on the screen.

Brian grabs a Bat Wings case off a display and sits it in his cart.

Hello Maurice Vaughan and thanks for sharing! I enjoyed a lot reading your work!

You're welcome, Ugo Cavallo. Thanks. It's Stage 32's November Write Club. It's a chance to connect with writers, directors, producers, etc., and it could help you reach a goal(s). There's going to be prizes too. If you're interested in joining Write Club, Week 1's blog came out today (www.stage32.com/blog/november-write-club-week-1-how-to-find-build-the-cr...).

Maurice Vaughan I would joined but actually I'm only feeding my graphic designers side, so if any of you needs a catchy eye, I can help ;)