These are from a feature screenplay about a grieving grandfather trying to reconnect with his estranged granddaughter after the death of his daughter. He was once a well-known artist. She's a 15-year-old city kid. The aunt (a Black professional woman) raised her. The story explores healing, generational tension, and emotional accountability. I’d love your honest take—not on plot mechanics, but emotional resonance. How do you feel about the way these characters talk about accountability and healing? What lands? What feels off?
Your Stage : Help with two short scenes. by Dale Worthington
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Hi, Dale Worthington. Welcome to the community. I’m a Stage 32 Lounge Moderator. I wanted to let you know I moved your post from the Introduce Yourself Lounge to the Your Stage Lounge. You can talk about your scenes in your introduction post, but you need to introduce/reintroduce yourself to the community. You could check out other posts in the Introduce Yourself Lounge to get ideas for your introduction post. Let me know if you have any questions.
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I suggest posting the scenes in the comments so members can read them and answer your questions.