Your Stage : Need help with my script/story bible by Dawn Ireland

I posted this to my Wall. Hello fellow screenwriters and producers. I have put together a bible for my sci-fi project, Prophecy of Thol. I am looking for a pair of eyes who is familiar with script/story bibles. I need someone to help me put things in the right order, delete things that don't belong, etc. It's 23 pages in MS Word.