Screenwriting : Logline advice. by Dean Steven Nichols

Dean Steven Nichols

Logline advice.

I am not happy with my logline, I'll appreciate your advice. LOGLINE: A Police detective investigates a murder, and discovers that the answer lies within the pages of a Medicine man’s book. She now must find the book before she became the next victim. This is a story an NY Police detective, who without knowing, she is guided by six spirits to resolve a 400 year curse of an Indian Chief.

Stuart Wright

A police detective must find a medicine man's book of remedies to solve a murder case and avoid being the next victim herself

Janet Hetherington

Cool premise. How about: A New York police detective receives unexpected help from the spirit world as she races to find a medicine man's secret book -- the one clue that will solve a gruesome murder, lift a 400-year-old curse and save her from becoming the next victim.

Dean Steven Nichols

Here's a link where you can read the "short outline," I have made some revision. http://www.deannichols.net/Forum.html#bn-forum-1-1-655917481/9948/983265...

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