Hi everyone, I made a post about this yesterday but I realised today that I didn't include a link to the logline, my apologies!
I've just finished writing my second screenplay called "What Happened in Coldbranch".
I only wrote one scene as I am just practicing at the moment, trying to build up to a full screenplay!
It is about the meeting of a small town sheriff with a resident who went missing seven years prior, only he seems different and she wants to get to the bottom of his disappearance.
I found this one a bit more challenging to write as I am still learning how to write natural dialogue, although one of the character's personalities did help in this regard as he didn't need to sound too natural haha.
I'd appreciate any feedback on my writing at all, thank you for reading this!
I am also wondering if anybody wants to do script swapping, I'm currently working on another one of these.
Link: https://www.stage32.com/profile/1078554/Screenplay/What-Happened-in-Cold...
1 person likes this
Congratulations on finishing your second screenplay, Joe Gipps! Intriguing title and concept. I'm about to check out your scene. I'll post my feedback.