Screenwriting : Screenplay Feedback by Alex Hastings

Alex Hastings

Screenplay Feedback

Hi everyone!

I finally finished my first feature-length screenplay and would love it if people could leave a review so I know I'm on the right track.

This is the link to my logline page: https://www.stage32.com/profile/1353824/Screenplay/The-Resonance

Constructive criticism is welcome.

Thanks!

Maurice Vaughan

Congratulations on finishing your first feature screenplay, Alex Hastings! Stage 32 also has feedback services (www.stage32.com/scriptservices). Also, your logline and synopsis are on your profile, but your script isn't.

Alex Hastings

Thanks! I fixed it.

Maurice Vaughan

You're welcome, Alex Hastings. I sold four short scripts to a producer by posting them on my profile and networking. I hope you sell your script too! Happy Holidays!

Antony Voronov

Alex Hastings Congrats! It's always a big event to finish a project that you've been working on for six months, a year, or more. I've read synopsis. The combination of aliens and zombies feels fresh. I would have expected the film to be more tongue-in-cheek in the James Gunn vein, playing with genre, rather than a serious narrative in 2000's style. I would also mention about aliens in logline, if I were you.

Pink Matzke

where is it? I clicked on the link and it took me to your profile page but there wasn't any loglines or scripts

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