Screenwriting : The audition by Shazz K

Shazz K

The audition

LOGLINE : After refusing to help his blacklisted friend twelve years ago, a washed-up acting teacher unwittingly trains the man's daughter to seduce and kill the producer who drove her father to suicide—realizing too late that his complicity was always part of her plan.

hey everyone, would love to get your thoughts and feedback on this one.

Maurice Vaughan

Hey, Shazz K. Unique concept! You put "unwittingly trains," so I don't think you need "realizing too late that his complicity was always part of her plan."

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