Screenwriting : The shadow among us by Stacy Makori

Stacy Makori

The shadow among us

Hey everyone... I recently wrote a script for my exam project. It's a short script like 15 pages and I would like someone to read it and give me feedback. My lecturer read the logline and immediately flogged it as AI

Stacy Makori

I would really like to get feedback from my fellow writers... If you wanna help me you could reach out and I'll gladly send you the script

E Langley

Is it? AI?

If not, why not push back against the Prof. If it is, you're busted.

Stacy Makori

Hey E Langley I didn't use AI. I never use Ai when it comes to writing scripts. I guess it seemed too good lol.

E Langley

Yeah, that must be it. LOL

Marc Ginsburg

I am so sick of seeing the word "horror" used here and elsewhere in the film industry, like everything has to be horrific, like life is not horrific enough. So it was so refreshing to see the noose instead that I give you an automatic 100

Marc Ginsburg

And as for anyone flogging anything as AI, are you kidding me? Since when are you an expert in AI that you think you have it pegged? I use AI bots regular to consult with and honestly, there is no unique AI formula or style. If anything, because people themselves are, to use the Billie Eilish song, such horrible copycats, there's tons of human writing that's more AI formulaic than AI. They're I, right? That means they have the intelligence to elude expectations. wWhere your professor got that idea is probably their own preconceived prejudice more than anything. Show me your script and let's see what this is really about?

E Langley

AI is remarkably transparent, easily pegged.

If someone uses it to write their profile, the chance is greater AI was used to write their script.

Agreed on seeing the material.

Victor Ameke

how do I read it? where is it

David Taylor

If you have read many millions of words and have written many millions of words AI stuff can be spotted.

Stacy Makori

Heey Marc Ginsburg thank you so much for your interest in reading the script! I’d love to send it to you, but I realized we’re not connected here so I can’t DM you. Is there another way I could share it with you?

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