Screenwriting : Trimming the Fat: Scrubbing away good writing feels bad by Elle Bolan

Elle Bolan

Trimming the Fat: Scrubbing away good writing feels bad

We've all been there - staring at a killer line we just cannot bring ourselves to backspace away.

My notes app accepts these sacrifices like a hungry god - gratefully and without complaint. But I do have a split second of regret when the cut happens. It's not quite like eating your young. Far less chewy. But there's an echo of what I imagine is a similar remorse.

'I hate that you gotta go, buddy, but GTFO.' then cut, paste.

Disappeared into the notes.

I call these guys my ghost lines.

Do you keep these sacrificial lambs as I do, tucked away in a file or note for potential resurrection someday? The zombie line's return.

What do you do with the lines you can't keep but are too good to just toss out?

Maurice Vaughan

Ghost lines/zombie lines. I like that, Elle Bolan. I keep mine in Microsoft Word documents in case I want to use them for projects later or future projects.

David Taylor

For every project, I have a spares folder for every cut, and a notes file to collect any ideas and a Superseded folder for previous script/document versions. Master copies: Current script; Pitch pages etc. If there is research, I have a Research document copy library Folder. Most include stuff whether it was used or not in the final product.

Elle Bolan

@Maurice I'm nothing if not silly haha. I can't seem to help it. I keep mine in a note doc or word doc. Whichever one I open.

Elle Bolan

@David - I wish I was that organized. I'm semi-organized. I have it all, just none of it is in a single, central place. I use different devices for different things but I'm scatterbrained and my "notes" are... Well. Yeah. Filenames don't get changed or updated. I know what it all is. I'll fix it all as things get fully packaged. I work in organized chaos.

Leonardo Ramirez

Oh yeah, absolutely Elle Bolan. I type them into a bullet point notes section of items I haven't deal with yet. Some are plot points while others can be one-liners that point to something.

Elle Bolan

@Leondardo My brain refuses that level of organization.

I infodump most of my notes. It's such a dang hassle. It's why I love my virtual assistant. I'd be lost in notes without it on a serious level.

Leonardo Ramirez

I'm jealous Elle Bolan. I want a virtual assistant now.

Elle Bolan

It's probably the most helpful thing I've embraced, app wise. I love just being able to spit out what I'm thinking and it picks it up. And is far better, visually, than my sorry ass notes haha

Leonardo Ramirez

So it's an app Elle Bolan ? What's the name of the app?

Elle Bolan

Otter.ai for voice notes. I use a standard Google assistant on one device and I'll never switch that one to Gemini. Gemini on my phone.

David K. Knight

I usually keep them in my previous drafts and change them out or delete them in my current draft. I am, however, planning a new "Ghost Scene Folder" for the specific script and scenes that are removed.

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