Screenwriting : Written Pitch Results! by Patrick Koepke

Patrick Koepke

Written Pitch Results!

I just got my first round of written pitch feedback (the first of three I ordered, the other two are still in review) and wanted to say the experience was well worth it. The exec understood what I was going for and gave thoughtful notes. Even if not everything aligned with what he was looking for (resulting in a Pass), I walked away with actionable feedback, including a reminder to make sure the emotional depth of the characters shines as brightly as the plot within the pitch.

My story itself scored well (4s across the board, with a 3 for originality of concept), while the pitch delivery and clarity got 3s, so I know exactly what to improve as I keep refining this process.

I'm grateful to Stage32 for providing this level of access to real pro-level feedback with a chance to move forward, and encouraged to keep honing both the pitch and the script.

Free plug: If you're on the fence about using Stage32’s pitch services, this was a great way to test the waters and get real industry insight.

Dwayne Williams 2

Patrick Koepke Love your drive to seek real feedback and keep refining. That mindset is what sets strong creators apart. Looking forward to seeing how you build on this!

Patrick Koepke

Thank you Dwayne Williams 2 ! The other two pending pitches are for the other two projects I have, so it should give me a good overall view of where I'm at across the board so I can improve.

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