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It's a touch teaser-y. Loglines should hook the reader (potential script readers, no less) with specifics, not with the promise of more info after you read the logline. We should gain insight into the character from the plot you sum-up in the logline, and we don't get that here. So, I think it's too vague. Good title though.
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Sounds interesting, comedy or horror?
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It's a touch teaser-y. Loglines should hook the reader (potential script readers, no less) with specifics, not with the promise of more info after you read the logline. We should gain insight into the character from the plot you sum-up in the logline, and we don't get that here. So, I think it's too vague. Good title though.
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Just a suggestion. Try this: Sick of being bullied, Ralph, a chemistry major, decides to teach his tormentors a lesson they may not survive.
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Hi Anthony, I greatly appreciate your suggestion.Thanks.
Hi Aimee, it's in the genre of sci fiction/non fiction.