Screenwriting : The world of organic chemistry by divij kak by Divij Kak

Divij Kak

The world of organic chemistry by divij kak

LOG LINE: Sick of being bullied in school, Ralph Thompson devises a macabre plan to teach the bullies a valuable lesson that they'll never forget.

Amanda Toney

Hey Divij, do you need help with this log line or are you just posting it? You can also post your log line to your profile, and everyone in your network will be notified.

Aimee Kimmey

Sounds interesting, comedy or horror?

Zach Rosenau

It's a touch teaser-y. Loglines should hook the reader (potential script readers, no less) with specifics, not with the promise of more info after you read the logline. We should gain insight into the character from the plot you sum-up in the logline, and we don't get that here. So, I think it's too vague. Good title though.

Anthony Moore

Just a suggestion. Try this: Sick of being bullied, Ralph, a chemistry major, decides to teach his tormentors a lesson they may not survive.

Divij Kak

Hi Anthony, I greatly appreciate your suggestion.Thanks.

Divij Kak

Hi Aimee, it's in the genre of sci fiction/non fiction.

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