Composing : What do you think? by Tobias Alexander Ratka

Tobias, again, good work! The shape of the melody is very nice, and breathes really nicely! The piano riff is nice, but when it goes to just piano and strings, it sounds a little thin - the piano feels a little too far back in the mix, and I am missing a lot of other information that could be filled out on the left side for too long, perhaps a nice pad here would help fill the gap? You might also want a 4-bar intro of sorts before the melody comes in? But as a composition very nicely done! -Sam

Thanks i'll think of that next time!

Nice tune Tobias. The percussion at the end seems a bit hot and needs to sit better in the piece - perhaps lower the pitch with more reverb and lower the volume? Just my two cents and thanks for posting.