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Max Koerner

Please give me feedback for my new production

Hello there!

My name is Max and I'm a film producer from Germany. Together with a crew of about 15 young filmmakers, I have started producing a web series calles "Seelenspiel" (Game of Souls).

Here's the link to the trailer: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=C7lyDFGavyI&t=9s

Subtitles in english are available. I'm really looking forwar to your comments, thoughts and feedback on the trailer!

Best wishes,

Max

Mike W. Rogers

Good work. Feels like Outlander with a cool Devil Pact twist. What type of feel are you going for?

Dan MaxXx

Solid acting and production skills but your trailer and editing is terrible. It's edited too fast and there is no clear storyline. I guess the village is attacked by Knight armored suit? Dunno.

Max Koerner

Mike W. Rogers Thanks! We want to create a fantastic world, based upon myths from our region (Fichtelgebirge in Germany). We aim for a contrast: some stories play in the present, others in the past. The present ist portrayed modern and simple, "normal" colors, traditional storytelling.

The past is shown in darker colors, we wanted a slower pace and more wide, beautiful shots. I have to admit that our project develloped during the whole shooting, which means that the current episodes (9 to 14) have a much diffrent look from the first episodes.

Episodes 1 to 8 are online, and there is a second trailer, which shows the new look in a better way ;)

Max Koerner

Dan MaxXx Thanks fot the feedback! I know that editing is our weak point, we have changed editor througout the series and are still looking for a good solution.

The trailer has not been edited by me or a cutter. Our director of photography has done the job as a volunteer and to try it out. I think, for his first trailer, he has done a pretty good job. But we always want to improove our product and therefore are searching for a solution to the post-production-problem.

There's a second trailer online on Youtube (https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vvS2DdJXWZ0&t=3shttps://www.youtube.com/...), which shows the style a bit better (personal opinion), but I think it is still too focused on the story.

Dan MaxXx

yeah, the second trailer, IMO, is not much of an improvement. Just 2 guys standing and talking. talking heads. where or what is the story? show the narrative

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