Your Stage : The Crossing Web Series teaser just got released! by Alyssa Stevenson

images look solid, especially to us American viewers. The outback is mysterious.

I'd suggest to add sound efxs and some dialogue clips - rather than a temp music score. Tell a narrative teaser of what your series is about

I liked it. Like, Dan, said maybe add a bit of dialogue...give us a taste of what is happening. But, overall, something I would tune into.

I get only a vague idea of the theme so a little dialog could go a long way. You've got some good crisp imagery but the abrupt editing style doesn't do it any good. But it's a good start.

Hi, Alyssa. There are some great shots here, and the score seems hauntingly appropriate. However, for me this is not a successful trailer./showpiece/sizzle reel. There is no sense of story, of who's fighting for what. To draw me in I need at least a hint of how the hero might have been wronged, and what he or she is willing to do about it. I wish you the very best.