An encouraging paragraph in reference to a pilot that i put a lot of time and effort into developing. It still needs a home, but comments like this help me push forward!
"Calling this pilot script unimaginative would be the understatement of the century. The vibrant realm
of Ruya it depicts is the very definition of an original idea. Its teaser and dream-like opening scene
vividly presents this realm to the audience, conveying both its stakes and the core conflict between
Kayroon and Sha with the upmost clarity. Carson as an aimless college student wrestling with
pertinent questions of identity is a fitting vehicle for a show of this nature. And as Ruya bleeds more
and more frequently into his life as he gets closer and closer to twenty-two, he is forced to face these
very questions as the stakes become very much real - the latter fact nicely demonstrated in his swollen
ankle and bloody shirt. It is worth mentioning that the reveal of his parents’ role in his larger destiny
is particularly satisfying here, setting the foundation for a larger emotional conflict in the show to
come."
