Introduce Yourself : My Screenplay's in Dry Dock by Peter Mahan

Peter Mahan

My Screenplay's in Dry Dock

One of the nice things that happened to me in 2020 was getting furloughed from my job for six months (yes, I did manage to stay financially afloat). With ample free time, it gave me that little push to try writing a novel version of one of my screenplays. The feedback I was receiving kept saying things like, 'this isn't clear, I need more info,' but I also knew filling in a lot of those details would make my page count go too high. I felt the best solution was to completely re-write the film but only AFTER writing the novel, the idea being I should know my characters and the story better in order to get the better feedback I'm going to need to attract a buyer. A couple more things: (1) I'm loving the writing process so much more knowing that the novel format allows for more expansive exploration. (2) I may find that I'm a better novel writer than script writer. Either way, I'm never bored in life because I've always got my writing to keep me company.

Cheryl Ives

I am definitely a better novel writer than screenwriter, but I'm determined to learn

Thomas Freeman Jr

That's all it takes is determination and the willingness to learn.

Andrea Zastrow

As for your writing keeping you company, I get that. I always joke that my characters are like imaginary friends. I'm glad 2020 had an upside for you. Good luck with your novel!

Sarah Gabrielle Baron

Doing a page 1 rewrite is a daunting process! I think you should be really proud of yourself and your fortitude. You're absolutely right that it will improve the screenplay to do the novel and then a page1 on the screenplay. This ability to self-edit and rewrite and truly mull through notes is what separates skilled swriers from novices. Keep Writing!

Monica Mansy

Hi, Peter Mahan I’m happy to hear you stayed above water throughout this difficult time and delved into writing! It’s great you’ve learned so much. May I suggest trying out the Writers’ Room? It’s a great place to learn more about the craft and build upon your creative skills. There are also so many other perks, like working on your pitch, script coverage, table reads and the opportunity to pitch working executives! If you’d like to try it out for a free month, please email Jason Mirch (j.mirch@stage32.com), the Director Of Script Services.

Peter Mahan

Thank you for the advice Monica. When the time is ripe, I'll definitely jump in with both feet!

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