Thomas Pemberton's Screenplay Lab (May 2021) : Hi everyone, by Camilla Erlandsdotter

I know! I sent mine off to Thomas yesterday and am not pleased with it at all! Writing out the bare essentials - choosing what to include and exclude really forces one to think about what the story is about. Camilla, your story has so much potential - it is so exciting and action packed! I was wowed by it - I can really see it on the big screen with A stars!

Thanks for the very nice compliment - I'll surely try to keep up with expectations (lot's of action)! Maybe at the end of the tunnel - when I hit the rejection wall - I'll have a softer landing...

no rejection! Think positive and visualize success! That's the only way to keep going!

It took me forever and I was also not happy with it. Hihi. But we will get better!!

Now and chunking everything out (except the commas) and starting out fresh again Hihi!