I'm Kamran from Fairfax VA, Entrepreneur with full of imagination. I have a book of stories that I'd like to see one day turn into Movies and Shows. I write mostly Thriller, Horror, Crime, Fiction. I just recently finished a very rough 45 pages for a new show. I'd like to know if you can read the first 10 pages and give me critical feedback. I also would be interested in reading yours too. You can check out my preview screenplay under my logline.
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WHA?! I didn't you know you're from my old stomping grounds! I went to West Springfield High School and my first year of college was at GMU - small world!
Definitely reach out on the Screenwriting Lounge to offer a script exchange: https://www.stage32.com/lounge/screenwriting You can also offer feedback on other people's loglines and follow up with a request for feedback: https://www.stage32.com/loglines
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That's very cool Karen and yes, small world. I had alot of friends at West Springfield too.
Hi, Kamran Hakimi, have you looked into the script coverage available here on Stage 32? I’ve submitted for industry reader coverage and it was just what I needed to further develop my script. There’s an option to have an industry reader (of your choice!) read your first 10 pages. To navigate which industry reader best fits your script, you can reach out to Jason Mirch (j.mirch@stage32.com), the Director of Script Services, for help. I would most definitely suggest this!