I have grown ever-confident ever since my 2021 short film won best comedy at the WSC Film Festival just a couple of weeks back. Meeting the people there has influenced me to start writing my first full-length feature, which I am currently still working on. In the meantime, a good friend of mine and I are working on a new YouTube series titled "We Hate Tuesdays." It is a comedy sketch series and we are so amazingly ready to start filming our randomness. The feature I am working on is called "Skullpiercer" and I would like someone to read it over, make sure I'm on the right track, etc. I would like to have an outside opinion before I start making it.
Screenwriting : New Projects! by Landon Boettcher
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Hey Landon, this is Karen from the Stage 32 team. I just wanted to let you know I moved your post from Filmmaking / Directing to Screenwriting (since you're asking for a script exchange for notes), as it fits much better there. Let me know if you have any questions, and all the best to you!
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... First, check again yourself. Your writing must feel like a fresh breath of air, while the reader turns pages at huricane speed. If it doesn't, shorten the amount of sentences and/or dialog, and if needed, your 'sentence structure'. Also get enough irony into your story.
Good luck with your projects, seems you're on a role.