A woman searches for answers after her young daughter vanishes aboard a flight.
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Your Stage : Hi guys, new screenwriter here with a project to pitch. Here's a logline for a sci-fi feature. by Daniel Duane
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Sounds intriguing. Could be worth building a story around it. :)
Daniel Duane I agree with, Stefano Pavone.
I think the logline needs to be beefed up some. I suggest adding an adjective in front of "woman," and maybe change "woman" to "mom." Your post says the story is a Sci-Fi feature. I think you also need to add the Sci-Fi element to the logline.