Would like to swap script coverage with another writer. Here's the logline and Coverfly page for more details.
"Mary in the White Room", Sci/Fi Adventure, Feature, 122 pages
When a newly self-aware humanoid robot runs from the corporate and government forces that want to weaponize its technology a secret war breaks out between two powerful Artificial Intelligence systems and the future of the world hangs in the balance of the choices that it makes.
https://writers.coverfly.com/projects/view/315f3958-68f6-4434-8e0c-70f75...
The script is nearing completion and my primary concern at this juncture is whether the protagonist's goals and motivations are clear enough.
Looking for a reader who is a fan of the genre.
Let me know about your script and if it interests me, we can swap coverage.
I'm looking to write and receive coverage of the same format that one would receive from an industry standard service.
Thank you!
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Not my genre, but your premise is great.
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Thanks Maureen. Nice to hear that. Yeah Mary goes from living their whole life in a lab to on the run on the mean streets of Los Angeles to outgaming a government AI surveillance system and a global hero/rock star! It's quite a journey.
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Wow, love it!
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Hi Steven! Did you know that you can post your loglines and their accolades here on Stage 32 in your profile? AND share that profile on social media? If you go to the "Profile" tab at the top of the screen, you'll see a dropdown. Just click "Loglines" and that will take you to the page where you can add "Mary in the White Room" to your profile. We've actually had producers find loglines they liked here on Stage 32.
As for the script swap, I love that you're reaching out in the lounges! If you need an assist, I made a doc a while back of writers on the site looking for script swaps. I don't know if all the people on the list are still looking to swap, but if you want, I can add you to the doc and you can reach out to them!
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Sure Emily add me to the doc and send me a link to it. Is this the best place to post the script swap? And I will post the logline as you suggest. Is it a good logline or does it need work? Man this is like version 108.5 or something like that lol.