Screenwriting : Intimate scenes by Esmaeil Torkzad

your set up is high, don't forget your side plots... rewrite if you must

Hey, Esmaeil Torkzad. What do you mean?

Maurice Vaughan thank you for asking Maurice. It's the first time the two characters have sex with each other, it has been hard for both to get there. I don't know what to do next. Should I write tomorrow morning, or as Vincent said above, go for a side plot.

thank you Vincent Turner . I'm thinking of it,

You're welcome, Esmaeil Torkzad. Do you have an outline? That might help you decide what the next scene should be.

sure Maurice Vaughan . Two women, a Syrian and an Iranian, have seen each other in Damascus, They have been through much in their countries because of who they are, and now in the course of events they have found each other and gone to bed with one another. It's not a night to share verbal information, just love, and tomorrow they both have to go to work. What do you suggest, they eat breakfast and talk, or we go with one of them (follow a side story) and find out when will be their next date in the future!? (the point is I don't know if it's a 50/50 choice or you should decide it clearly). Thanks again Maurice Vaughan for your time and enthusiasm.

I haven't been there yet, but writing one needs to happen for me.

Feels like a good moment for some conflict. They've found each other, now something needs to get in their way.

You're welcome, Esmaeil Torkzad. You said, "It's not a night to share verbal information, just love, and tomorrow they both have to go to work." Maybe someone saw them and the next day at work, he/she threatens to expose them if they don't pay money or something.

Thank you dear Maurice Vaughan , that's a good suggestion, some sort of twist that clearly will effect them both cam be a nice diamond twist. I really appreciate your time and attention.

Sallie Olson thank you so much for your attention. that's a good one.

You're welcome, Esmaeil Torkzad.