Hi, Max Sappa. I watched the A Thread of Light video. It's incredible and gripping! I like that you made the light move down the paper as you read, and the music is perfect for the story!
Thank you Maurice and Monica. Your words fill me with immense joy. As writers we write for the readers after all, right? :)
By the way, if you would like to write your comments directly on the YouTube video... well, it would help me immensely. By the way, I've just written another short, which I will read out soon... I don't want to disclose too much... it is much darker, yet, also with a thread of hope at the end... maybe... OK, I'll shut my mouth now... I didn't say anything ;)
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Hi, Max Sappa. I watched the A Thread of Light video. It's incredible and gripping! I like that you made the light move down the paper as you read, and the music is perfect for the story!
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Hi Max Sappa, I agree with Maruice that the story of very gripping. And the way you read it makes it even more compelling.
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Thank you Maurice and Monica. Your words fill me with immense joy. As writers we write for the readers after all, right? :)
By the way, if you would like to write your comments directly on the YouTube video... well, it would help me immensely. By the way, I've just written another short, which I will read out soon... I don't want to disclose too much... it is much darker, yet, also with a thread of hope at the end... maybe... OK, I'll shut my mouth now... I didn't say anything ;)
Yet, I would say this again: THANK YOU!!!
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You're welcome, Max Sappa. Ok, I'll make sure to post my comments on YouTube too.
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You're so kind Maurice :)
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Hey Max, Love the approach — respect to writers who just let the work speak.
I’m in the comedy lane with James Christ, a feature about the forgotten little brother of Jesus.
Digging the mood of that short — “a thread of light” is a strong hook.
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Thank you Randy. I guess James Christ is the cousin of a guy called Brian? Is that right?
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Definitely Life of Brain!